Draft of Public Argument

Below I have posted my first Draft of the Project.

Johnhain. "Practice." 2014 via pixabay.
Public Domain. 

While reading this, please pay attention to organization. It is always hard for me to put things in the correct order, so help me keep en eye on the placement of our argument.
Also help me keep an eye on use of pictures and evidence throughout the piece, as I don't to use something dumb or out of place for our paper.

Link to paper.