Paragraph Analysis

For this post I analyzed my own paragraphs in order to see where I was strong and what I need to work on for my QRG.

Here is a link to my analysis.

McPhee, Nic. "Editing a Paper - 01." January 26, 2008 via Flickr.
Public Domain. 

Strengths:

• transitions
• including both sides or argument 
• using titles 
• some hyperlinking, should include more 

Weaknesses:

• introductory point in some paragraphs lacks substance or hook
• conclusion paragraph needs work to make piece memorable or important 
• maybe needs to include more content? 

Overall, I learned that my paper is really good in some areas but needs work in others. I can transition within and between paragraphs mostly okay, but I need to work on the topic sentences to make them stronger. I think too that I may need to add more paragraphs. I could find more sources and add that content in as well to do this.