Below is a link to my draft of a rhetorical essay. When reading it please keep an eye out for full analysis. I feel like when I am writing, I skip around or get distracted, making my analysis less than it should be. Also, please keep an eye out for organization. Like I said, I get distracted while working and like to jump around to different points, and I won't realize it.
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I think this is a good start! I think that you could hav gone a bit more indepth, but what you did analyze was well supported. I agree that you did jump around a bit, but with some editing, this will be great!
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